All Comments on 'Natural and Supernatural'

by Nathaniel_Selene

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PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 13 years ago
Mmmm

A very sexy story. Good luck in the contest.

AvitusCatoAvitusCatoalmost 13 years ago
nice

ure story and style of writin does have lots of potential. keep it up. maybe put in a bit more character development but otherwise its good.

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