All Comments on 'Neighborhood Fun Pt. 02'

This writer has always been a lazy writer because the story he writes is garbage it doesn’t make sense and he is to scared to put it in the correct section the writer just likes to bait the proud readers of the loving wife section into hating him

I have to say i was surprised at the scores dropping with each chapter. Well now I understand. The theme was good to start but frankly it lacked content, it lacked use of an auto correct and totally failed to deliver any real thrill. In the end what is sex without a thrill, just no climax, no wow factor. Just nothing. Sorry

Jean

Don't be too hard on the captain. He's only 13.