All Comments on 'Nerves Pt. 01'

This is barely a short story. No build up. No explanation. Nothing.

Appreciate the feedback, I purposely started this as a cold opening and it's my first story but I'll keep that in mind and try to improve :)

I can't wait to keep reading this, great intro to what I think will be a fantastic story line!

Thank you so much! I can't wait for part 2 to post. I hope you enjoy it!

Unusual start, but judging by the end it was intentional brat behaviour.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

Thank you!