All Comments on 'New Life Ch. 03'

I am pleased so far. Resolving ethical dilemmas is rarely simple or clearcut. Write your story. Don't worry about categories.

From the first chapter I thought it would go in a different direction, then it seemed to again in this chapter but then you veered away again.. I get that's he's a nice guy and all.. but this is a sex story site and the theme is mind control.. And you're writing a story where he has it but feels bad using it and when he does abruptly stops.. Hardly satisfying.

This is an excellent story line and you definitely need to continue it. The sex not withstanding, it is a good plot and the flow woeks well.