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hindsight202010 months agoRead my comment on the first part.
You are NOT READY for second person.
You are simply not ready.
Work on first person for a few years.
You are a long way from tackling second person.
Anonymous10 months agoA pet peeve of mine: Why do some many writers make each "short" page a chapter ? Write a full story and submit at once. Three stars.
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