All Comments on 'Office Play'

Fabulous erotic story, I felt I was there I couldn’t stop reading.. Luke is a lucky man!! Thank god I was sitting down reading this. So erotic and HOT

You write so well and in great detail. I will certainly have a smile on my face 😊 thankyou X

Really enjoyed this, nicely written. Had me on the edge and beyond…. Thank you.

Sexy and compelling. Its also good to read a story that feels at least heavily inspired by real events and ends in a plausible way, rather than begging a next part.

I was half expecting Stace and Lucie to end up in the room together, but that not happening is one of the things that made it feel more real.

It would have been good, however, to have heard what happened with Stace. Did she stay on too or did Lucie out-bid her? If she stayed on did they know about each other's relationship with Luke but leave it unspoken?

Very horny stuff

Absolutely amazing so hot, extremely well written like all your stories, always leave's me wanting more!!!

You really are very very Good at this. 😊

Mmm, great story. It started very nicely and built up to a gorgeous climax. Full or juicy details, withiut ever becoming boring! Hope you will post more stories.

Well done Lucie , very sexy and hot!

Good writing too x

Your innovative storytelling give new meaning to the term: On the Job. Sadly, I'm a very busy writer these days so I don't get much chance to read or listen to stories here. But one thing's for sure: I always read your sexy hot tales and enjoy them immensely! Thank you, Harriet-Jacqui Furl (HJ Furl)

I may not be able to walk very far now, darling girl, but your story makes my middle stump stand proud and strong.

Well written tale. Like someone else I’m left wondering if Stacy and Lucie ever discussed their activities. Either way, a fun read.

I really thought you were going to tell him to fuck off once he'd got his cock out ... I'm glad you didn't though - the fuck is much hotter

Well written - thoroughly enjoyed it :)

Always passionate, always compelling. Lucie sounds like she turns heads and makes people horny everywhere she goes!

Your story was so hot and very realistic, Almost as though something like this had actually taken place in your past. I will be back to read more from you. J.D.

That was a hot story! She fucked him for her job; at BU, I fucked my geeky TA to bump my grade from a B/B+ to A. I stopped by his office before finals, wearing a short skirt and did the hard sell on needing an A, he 25 and easy pickings. He said he couldn't do much, so put one heal on my chair and swung my bent knee outwards, giving him a great view of my bush and asked he if saw anything he liked. One minute later he was licking my slit, turned out he had a nice cock and I enjoyed the occasional ride. Eat your hearts out guys, I got the "A" and a good "O" too!

This was an awesome story!

At first, you made me hate Luke the store manager. Having worked in a corporate environment for most of my life I've seen and heard stories like this. Eventually, at the end, my feelings softened because you made mention of an 8 month relationship.

I really enjoyed this story and it kinda got me worked up! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories.

That was hot .

Another cracker, LL007. Obviously it was reprehensible for Luke to use the threat of redundancy to get into Stacie's and your underwear and cleavage (& in your case your pussy!), but in the end the way you told the story and got so much enjoyment and satisfaction from the encounter, made it feel real and just about acceptable. Interesting that you continued the relationship for 8 months while at the store - like was a very lucky guy!!

Very sexy story. Love how real life it could be

Each story I read is better and better, keep going please :)

Loved this story, Lucie! Really wished I was Luke. Story was set up well and the pace was just right. Can't wait to read more of Lucie's adventures

Excellent suspense and sex. Five stars.