All Comments on 'On a Park Bench'

Fun story of two people coming to understand each other a little more, and sexy!

Dropped the ball, though, when she, bare-assed, gets down on her knees to continue the encounter, and he says, "What are you doing?"

It's like he is not the guy we were just reading about a couple of sentences earlier.

Cannot give you a 4.3-4.6 that you deserve for a good short story with a dropped ball in it, so you get a little better...

Nice short story that's respectful to the lady