All Comments on 'Over the Lap of Luxury Pt. 04'

This series continues to be delicious - I can't wait for Portia to use irritants on him or teach him more self control. Also, like Asher, I'm getting curious about her agenda.

EXCELLENT fourth part. Always with this elegant style, perfectly suited to this story. Looking forward to part five. BIG THANKS to RainyDayPen.

Too much plot not enough sex, possibly?

Thank you for the feedback all! Totally appreciate your thoughts and kind words. For the person concerned about plot I will try to watch that I don't get too wordy.

Great story and a nice world you are building.

I would love to see someone from Asher's past at that dinner party. Like an arrogant rich girl who knew him when he wasn't poor and who always thought that she was better than him. How embarrassing!

This is so nice, thank you so much. Looking forward to the next part.

Is this really the last episode?I hope not, this happy gang of three Portia's posse can have lot of adventures yet.

Thanks all! Glad you like it so far, and there will definitely be more in this series coming up in the next couple weeks. (And I do think Asher will see an old familiar face next chapter!) Just took a break to write my Halloween contest entry which you may enjoy if you like my F/m content.