All Comments on 'Owing a Life Debt'

Truly awful.

sorry you came back. garbage.

the story feels rush

Very poor

Crap! I didn't expect that ending.

I think everything about this is shit. If this is what you're bringing back to the table, you should go away again. There's a shitload of cuck, crappy writers out there already. You add nothing to the mix.

Stay gone longer next time. Please.

I took a chance - "femdom" should have warned me off.

I found this deeply depressing. The sex wasn’t even that hot. Sorry.

So which would be worse? Explaining to her mother why he can’t keep a promise or living in misery? Besides, the promise to her mother was gratuitous as her father covered the cost of his father’s heart transplant without any promises or other consideration. Further, his promise didn’t cost her mother anything and she certainly suffered no loss or refrained from anything in response to his promise.

Awful

What a load of bullshit. You need to take courses for writing characters.

No emphaty for your characters

Such a sad story....... Well written, but ripped my heart out for Jared.

Wow. Why didn't I see this coming? But what happens if Jared's dad dies... or Roger gets seriously injured? Does Reese simply move on to another big-dicked loser? Or what if it gets back to her father that Reese has become Roger's sexual slut?

Gone Girl all over again.

Utter shiite

Much like your biography empty and meaningless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sad you quit wrighting I really the start to this story. This could be filled in with a ton of details and directions too. Please come back ;-)

OK til the blackmail then nothing.