All Comments on 'Paladin Ch. 04: The Maiden's Plight'

by remlin

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Oh, how cruel by Sir Simon to prevent Raya from finding relief. Isn't he aware that he is supposed to save a girl from her plights? Instead: more 'torment'. Poor, poor Raya. :-)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

How cruel (delicious) to see Raya's torment. I hope we see more of this.

FudgeBunnyFudgeBunny4 months ago

Love this story.

I also love the fragments of Zeff and Raya’s story. Would you ever consider a prequel about Rayas time as zeffs captive?

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