All Comments on 'Paradise Park'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WRONG CATEGORY!

Never mind, Literotica often disagrees with its authors but they are, in my experience, always wrong. There are too many grammatical and spelling mistakes along with this girl apparently fucking a robot. There is no real characterisation, making it all somewhat distant to the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Yoowsza

Woowee! Sounds like these two were heating up the park. I wish that I had been one of the lookers-on.

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