All Comments on 'Part 02 - Zoe on a Business Trip'

the is nothing better than when my wife returns home from being with another man. The arousal for hours as I wait for her. The wondering whats happening. Trying not to jerk my dick as I want to save it for her return. Then hearing all the naughty details as I reclaim her. Seeing the tell tale signs another man has recently been there...the hand prints, the love bites, the red and puffy lips of her pussy. So incredibly intense.

Not as erotic as I expected, but well well-written with a scintillating plot. Rather flat after an almost breathtaking opening in Chapter One. Your very different writing style is difficult not to read.