The tone of the story sounds like the guy is going to eat a gun. I like that you captured the angst and pain, but I can't see anyone, even a cuckold staying in this relationship.
I was a Biker during the 70's Had a 48' Pan Head, a 41' knucklehead and built a 77' Shovelhead. My buddies called My Shovel Head the 'death machine' because it was very fast, brand new shovel Head Motor out of a crate, big cam, S&S Super Drag Carb. and belt drive~ But little ...