All Comments on 'Pizza Delivery by Adonis Pt. 01'

I liked the first part of the story where she is fantasizing about seducing Jon. The second part where she actually fucks him was not to my liking. The action seemed too precipitous, even knowing that he had been (probably) spying on her through her window. I would have expected her to go more slowly, perhaps dropping the towel for a moment, and then quickly picking it up and make some casual comment about the incident and hope that he says something nice and wants to see her breast again. The writing shows good care with grammar etc.