by SemperMonke
Good story, and I am looking forward to reading how it progresses, I was disappointed that he went the paid for not working by several companies route, which has been used before.
Though to be honest sitting here writing this I can't think of an alternative solution other than an initial staying at work and sorting out the bad lady as is being done, and maybe using that as a springboard for other intentions. We will see as we go on.
Nice work. Really enjoyed it. I liked his idea for money, but i would have had him enslave a hot VP along the way, maybe at one of the three he missed?
I really enjoyed it so far, not too much detail but also some "world building" to set up for the next chapters. One thing I am hoping for is the liberation of his old co workers. Could be nice too.
Keep up the good work