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Click hereThe man rubbed some cream into my back to help stop the pain and itching before bandaging me back up. He doesn't want me on a pain killer because I won't feel it if something was missed. As I calm down and relax, the pain might increase. If it gets too bad, he will give me a pain killer. For now, just something to help me sleep. That's the best thing for me right now.
To be continued ...
- COMMENTS
OpenWords2 months agoFirst: I agree with Rimmerdal... second: it takes about 3 brain cells to understand the dishonorable behavior involved in wearing another man's military uniform. Why would you label your protagonist in such a light?
Anonymous5 months agoWho is Samantha?
FYI: “… After dinner, I held the Queen's arm…”
As a matter of protocol, touching, the queen is a very big NO NO.
Rimmerdal6 months agoCut out everyone crying at the drop of a hat.
I seriously doubt any specops groups carry revolvers. So fix that.
Otherwise on a 'maturity' scale around 14-16 year olds and women who love ROMCOMS.
Anonymous7 months agoGreat storyline, although the grammatical errors, typos and generally clumsy writing is very distracting. An editor would bring this up to a 5.
tlevanssr9 months agoI gave it 4 stars instead of 5 because you need a better editor. Amanda's dad went from Richard to Robert to Edward then back to Robert. Some how Amanda turned into Samantha. Otherwise the story is great. On a good note I have saved it to my favorites and have read it several times. Just thought you need some criticism. On to part 2.
Lacastrianabout 1 year agoMark's love for Janet came out of nowhere! Mark barely knows Janet, and she was a spoiled brat 90%+ of their time together. It's a story full of inconsistency
