All Comments on 'Property of the RC Ch. 02'

Cracking stuff ... keep going please :).

I loved it. Keep writing, please.

I agree. The story just got better. Please, continue :)

Story wise, it's getting better. Unfortunately, the same problem continues from the previous chapter. Spelling errors and problems with the characters names getting mixed up. I will say one thing though, the spelling errors appear to be consistent, because when some word was misspelled in in part 1 it was also misspelled in this installment the same way.