by Beth_Anne90
I was just getting into the story and then bang it was all over lol wish i still had dreams like that .
Thankyou for taking time to write the story for us the readers .
Very good Beth! I didn't know you were a writer and for your first published one it turned out quite arousing! Can't wait to see if there are more to follow.
I really enjoyed the story. Love reading stories about sexually assertive, older women who want men old enough to be her son. Knowing that she imagines younger men calling her ‘mom’ and wants them to cum inside her bareback. Was a bit disappointed it all turned out to be her own fantasy but still a hot read.
Very good 1st story… the best part was the last part when reality bumps in…nice….
Nice story—good pace. Hope you keep writing! Maybe write about a past hot experience :)
absolutely loved the dream aspect and how it ends abruptly like a dream does .great job!!!
Loved it Beth, you have talent. Just persevere and ignore any negativity.
This is the sort of story refuses to set the reader down. You will find your libido playing with aspects of the story long after the page has run-out of typed words. An absolutely perfect edging story for those with imagination and desire.
I loved your story Beth! Kind of exciting with a let down ending. Hope there is a part2 in the works!