All Comments on 'Rudy Ch. 05: Reunion'

Felt a little flat to me. Didn't evoke much emotion, and the plot honestly meandered a little too much. Writing skills are clearly there, so obviously feel free to ignore and keep at it.

But still, it's great that someone at least is taking care of the underserved audience of the mentally ill.

www.literotica.com/s/reunion-132

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132 stories on here with the same stupid title. That's all that's needed to know how much effort -- except for typing -- went into writing it.

Pretty bad concept and execution and 6 pages just made it worse.

Hi Sun

Congratulations on another nice story with a good mix of drama!

Don't pay any attention at the three 'Anonymous' posts. I noticed that they were posted at the same time, most likely the same jealous person posting all three.

Nasty, not in a good way, cheating bitch story.

Wow, four inseminations in two years by one man. I know it can be done in one day - or nine months plus if two of these involve the same woman. Still a hot story. Make me wish for a Rudy in my life...

Read this a second time after I read Ch. 6. Great plot. Ch. 6 inspired me to read Ch. 4 as well.