All Comments on 'Rewarded Ch. 08'

Genuinely amusing. Well done. Better than Azil did, even.

First of all, I love the story and the writing - up to a point

As much as I like the premise of "the reward" and the power, I think the plot is losing a little steam. It was a more interesting story when the protagonist was trying to figure out what his powers are, and have qualms about using it indiscriminately, the guard rail seemed to have come off completely in the latest installment. I would love for the story to revisit the power's origin and perhaps throw a plot twist in that'll make it more of a journey or a quest.

ok so now he treats someone he is meant to have feelings for as a hand around ? this story just gets worse and worse.