All Comments on 'School's Out Ch. 01'

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Jaydean409Jaydean4098 months ago

Very hot. Love the two fucking the Mom with her son in her ass. Looking forward to chapter two!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Interesting piece of fiction, doubtful that the boys could ever sweet talk their way into their mother's bodies like that, but like I say it was a good read anyway.

james1801james18018 months ago

Loved it! Nicely done. Hope there's more to come ๐Ÿคž

Becaa57Becaa578 months ago

It was good at first a bit hard to follow who was who's mom etc... But the sex part was good!! Keep up writing

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

loved this story, well written, cant wait till the sons explore moms further...

maddictmaddict8 months ago

Guess who's cumming for dinner, Phil, Josh, Dave, billy and Graham. I would luv to come over for dessert "(!)"

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It was good start. Hope there is another one coming out soon. Might have the other mother get DP'd also. Could make them both get pregnant...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good story! I am really looking forward to reading more.

bucco40bucco407 months ago

Liked it. Need to make sure it's clear who is talking. Also, slow down. Give more details. We don't know the women's bust size, how are they groomed. Trimmed, shaved bald, full bush.

upyoursixupyoursix7 months ago

Good concept if a little quick. Seems a bit rough on the editing but I'm from the US so that may be a difference in area

AnecdoteskepticAnecdoteskeptic4 months ago

I liked it a lot. Good plot, but the seduction could be more believable, maybe give the background that each mom lusted after the otherโ€™s son, lowered inhibitions. More details! Keep writing!

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