by andrewp67
Very hot. Love the two fucking the Mom with her son in her ass. Looking forward to chapter two!!
Interesting piece of fiction, doubtful that the boys could ever sweet talk their way into their mother's bodies like that, but like I say it was a good read anyway.
It was good at first a bit hard to follow who was who's mom etc... But the sex part was good!! Keep up writing
loved this story, well written, cant wait till the sons explore moms further...
Guess who's cumming for dinner, Phil, Josh, Dave, billy and Graham. I would luv to come over for dessert "(!)"
It was good start. Hope there is another one coming out soon. Might have the other mother get DP'd also. Could make them both get pregnant...
Liked it. Need to make sure it's clear who is talking. Also, slow down. Give more details. We don't know the women's bust size, how are they groomed. Trimmed, shaved bald, full bush.
Good concept if a little quick. Seems a bit rough on the editing but I'm from the US so that may be a difference in area
I liked it a lot. Good plot, but the seduction could be more believable, maybe give the background that each mom lusted after the otherโs son, lowered inhibitions. More details! Keep writing!