All Comments on 'Seducing Deion'

Good start to the story. Hopefully there'll be a sequel. One word of advice though, after you write the story, read it as a reader (or find someone to edit it). When he removes Deion's shorts, he's laying on his back. Then after the oral, Emmanuel kisses his way up Deion's body, but after the penetration Emmanuel wraps his legs around him (from the cowboy position? Not complaining, I really enjoyed the story!!! Just trying to help make it better for the reader. Just a thought

Nice hot story. I felt the confusion Deion felt. Still the story got me hot.. 10 stars for it. Keep writing.

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A good realistic story, well written with real feelings and expectations.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories..

DV19