by stripgnd
The last line (re the wedding) made me laugh out loud. The discussion of anal with her Mum was good but a little surreal. Please continue.
Another terrific chapter for this series. The discussion Sophie has with her mother was so well done. And the concept of the calendar was a fun twist. You have a great gift of storytelling. I hope there will be another installment.
Loved it ! You tell a good story, I'm an old geezer but I think I would still enjoy the joke, at your expense. If it were my daughter?????
Your stories are amazing! Another great addition!
On a story level, it does seem like Hanna won the game too easily, which, on one hand, gave the story less tension and build up, but on the other hand, it does add to the embarassment. (Could it be a setup?)
And I do want to read more about the yoga poses at the end of the story!
All in all great writing, and I am eagerly waiting for the next installment!
The strip game was loaded into a random card selector program and I wrote it from the results. I would have rerun it had Sophie won, but as she didn't I just went with it. It was very one sided.
Thanks for the comments.