All Comments on 'Sex Positive Home Pt. 04'

I respect your desire to end the story, but this ending leaves much to be desired. The heat from the previous sections is missing, and the included “sex scenes” are perfunctory at best. This is essentially soft core compared to the first three entries.

It is difficult for me to evaluate this story. That's why I didn't give it a rating.

Overall, it's an interesting idea, though not fully developed. I think there should be a sequel. And it is desirable to add a little tension. It seems that the author is in a hurry to write the text before he forgets what he wants to say. And I agree with the previous comment: the last chapter is much weaker.