All Comments on 'Sharing Pt. 03'

Part four please

Good effort, good story line. A little light on the character development. Also, there is a difference in the words, 'then' and 'than', and they are not interchangable. The former describing chronological events, the latter to separate items to be compared. Have your significant other give your story a once over for editing purposes. Again, good effort.

yes please to part 4

No cunnilingus?

part 4 sounds better than the fucking you received from tom so write on please

Yes part four would be appreciated