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by Biggalute

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redbaron172redbaron172about 1 year ago

Good Lord, good job on the descriptiveness of all the action..... almost pissed my pants laughing.... but glad she survived..... need a follow up on the other rescuer??? Loved it....

I'm like you need to get back into writing...you proofed a story for me, will contact you to see if you want to do another....RB

paul2021paul2021about 1 year ago

Just picked this up - brill - so funny - you have a wonderful imagination - P

fsa52fsa522 months ago

I was laughing all the way through it!

Loved it!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun2 months ago

Really funny! Well done!

barefootgirl69barefootgirl69about 2 months ago

This has me laughing! The way you described everything was brilliant. I could picture it in my mind. 😂

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I'm back writing and enjoying it. I'm enjoying the creative process and listening to the characters 'talk' in my head. People reading and enjoying my stories is a nice bonus. 4/1/24 Still alive and new stories coming soon, hope you enjoy