All Comments on 'Shy Wendy Ch. 04'

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KarotteKarotteover 2 years ago

Wow - that developed in a completely different direction as I expected. Thank you so much for this part. I really like where the story is directing - and I'm really looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story line, love the twist. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it isn’t too long a wait. This one could use another proof read, has typos and sections that aren’t clear. Not as clean as your other chapters. Still great story and character development.

Rainyday493Rainyday493over 2 years ago

So, Wendy's mum had the right idea about contraception "just in case"!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story! I`m looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great plotting and pacing. Love the twist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a good premise.

Better sex. Not all 'story'.

But rushed.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next Chapter. Hope we see it soon. Really enjoying the story line.

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