by Scorpio86
Wow - that developed in a completely different direction as I expected. Thank you so much for this part. I really like where the story is directing - and I'm really looking forward to the next part.
Great story line, love the twist. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it isn’t too long a wait. This one could use another proof read, has typos and sections that aren’t clear. Not as clean as your other chapters. Still great story and character development.
Looking forward to the next Chapter. Hope we see it soon. Really enjoying the story line.