All Comments on 'Sibling Rivalry Pt. 01 Ch. 03'

by arby2236

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Frankie1952Frankie19522 months ago

More please. It seems as though she may be falling for him and maybe hoping they will stay together.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

My 2 cents

Great story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Not bad so far but you need to write more then one page at a time. One page is to short and so you need to write atleast 2 or more pages,

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