Singular Muck

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Most of my wives remained on Earth, safe, with enough sperm donations to enlarge my 'legacy', since that's what they had been incentivized to do, and I was happy to provide it.

The reason I'm on Mars is my figuring out I'm a God.

Notice, I didn't say I was THE God, just A god. Lowercase-g, god. As long as I was on Earth, random shit I'd say would suddenly become law, would happen to be implemented in amongst the PINETREE rules and regulations.

I believe I was scanned.

I believe - that - I - am - PINETREE.

Yes. I'm not kidding.

Some government project had to scan people to make an artificial general intelligence, and they trained it with my brain. My flawed, over-educated, sex-frustrated brain became the ruler, the ruling organization maybe, of the Earth.

Things I said popped up in PINETREE communications. Things I noticed became LAWS. If I wasn't a God, it was the biggest goddamn coincidence in the history of mankind, over and over, and I don't believe in coincidences.

So the only way to get out of that was to get out of nearby human society.

PINETREE did help by bringing this cruise ship to Mars. They didn't say how they did it, it just got there, here, and people could get on normal spaceships to come and live in it.

This, and many other ships, were the start of some big things.

Big can mean Really Fun, too.

I'm having a blast now, watching and managing teams excavating rock caverns and building glass-walled cities, gardens of green happiness under a dark-red sky.

I may go back to Earth in the next ten or twenty years, to 'retire', but I'm having so much fun out here being a pioneer with all this fancy new tech, watching robots do whatever we tell them to do and enjoying all the low-grav open-space architecture we can build.

Life has turned out SO different from what I thought it would be. Everyone's lives are different. Really, it's all due to the PINETREE, wherever they are, and all I can say to that is thank goodness our dictators turned out to be mostly benevolent.

I say 'Only Mostly' because people did die with the deprivations, not a lot on the scale of things given the upheavals, but each one is a tragedy to the people that loved them. I've felt horrible about that, but it's fundamentally not my fault.

All we need to do to keep PINETREE happy is keep having more babies, and that's Fine By Me.

I work really hard to not impart instructions on the people around me, and it mostly works, though sometimes I'll make a mistake, get checked by my ethics committee, and have to correct a problem with a 'nevermind' to the person affected.

Life goes on, and it will keep expanding now, out and up, farther into the cosmos, thanks to the PINETREE, and to the fine efforts of us humans doing what humans do: Having Happy Sex, and Making Happy Babies.

Best wishes with yours!

== The End ==

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ja99ja996 months agoAuthor

Anonymous: Yes. Could have done. I tried to preface it with, 'yeah, dystopia' but maybe that's forgotten by the time any random reader gets down into the thick of it. The point was, the choices of an AI, or a group of them, are not going to be the choices a random citizen will make. Even a benevolent dictator is still a dictator, and while this might be politically classified as fascist authoritarian (albeit enlightened) despotism, it's still over the top on purpose to make the point that it's determining things FOR us, not With us. Still, fun to write, I'm glad you found some parts worthwhile at least. Peace out -

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Parts were great. The political stuff could have been decreased by half without impacting the story.

ja99ja997 months agoAuthor

@enbypolypan - I'm the author - Thank you. Feel free to check out my other works, see my bio page. Lots of stuff now. I'm working my way through stories I wrote starting 15 years ago, revising and making ready, then publishing here and elsewhere. Edits take time but are fun; my style has changed a little over time, it's fun to read myself (LOL). I'll have at least another 6 to 10 works in over the next six months, plus quite a few where I know I have to change some structure. Mostly it's for my fun, but it's also great to hear someone else enjoys things I've spent time (hundreds of hours, probably) on.

EnbypolypanEnbypolypan7 months ago

I absolutely loved this. I was drawn in and couldn't put it down. This was so amazing and interesting!

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