All Comments on 'Sins of Our Fathers Ch. 05'
by KayTWrites762
- 9 Comments
Anonymousabout 4 years agoExcellent as always! I’m hoping that we haven’t seen the last of Riley and Gavin together. Can’t wait for the next installment!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling John might be someone to watch. This has been an amazing story so far!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis story is so spellbinding, and emotion packed. My heart is going to burst if the ending is as horrible as I suspect it will be. You have a great talent, and I thank you for sharing this story. Hope the wait isn't too long. Sunshine :)
Anonymousabout 4 years agoUh previous Anon, I hope you meant Austin/Logan and Riley not Gavin because poor girl doesn't need to be put through the ringer anymore.
I was the anon from Ch. 4 mentioning constructive critiques, glad to see you apply the changes and I hope to see where you move forward with the story.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis chapter was excellent and I anxiously await the final chapter :)
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI come here frequently to see if it's updated .this is one of the few stories here that actually peaked my interest . Your writing is excellent and I'm looking forward to see more .
KayTWrites762about 4 years agoAuthorIt's coming!!!! The pandemic and quarantine has made things hard.... but for those of you waiting for the bitter end of it all... it's coming soon!!!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoAnonymousabout 4 years agoI love non con with a happy ending. Not all of it is horrific. I feel for the kids and hope Gavin and his band of merry mender a ass fucking and beating. They Need a day at rikers prison as a pedi that would cure them if there behavior. Please let this end well
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