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Click here"What if it was a brother?" Jenny asked.
"Eh," Jasmine replied, shrugging herself, "I mean...I don't know, it's not my business really? I just never thought about it. Don't have a brother. Don't...I don't know..."
Suddenly Jasmine was crying. Jenny immediately pulled her into a hug as Jaya moved back and took Jasmine's glass. Jasmine "ugly cried" for several minutes straight, putting enough tears into Jenny's white dress that the shoulders started to go see-through. Eventually she started mumbling into Jenny's shoulder.
"I'm all alone. Mike and Vin...I was a fun aside. I didn't...it wasn't real with them and...Jaya...she never..." Jasmine broke down again.
Jaya had pulled her hand back when she heard her name. She looked up at Jenny, expecting an accusatory look but she only saw sympathy, and it almost drove her to tears as well.
"I'm sorry," she said. She wanted to offer comfort, but she didn't trust herself to hold it together. She looked up at Jenny pleadingly. She didn't know how to tell Jenny it was all too much but she saw Jenny's face and the genie seemed to just understand. Jaya got up and took hers and Jenny's glasses to the sink, but she couldn't bring herself to sit back down. Instead she retreated up to her room and sat on the bed, only then letting her own tears flow over her distressed sister.
- COMMENTS
OnlyInMyMind10 months agoI'm enjoying the series but sometimes its confusing. Names keep getting changed for no reason and it muddles the plot
Michael56Smithover 1 year agoOkay, the INCEST part of this story is getting closer, I think, ... and we get to briefly meet Trevor's kids (adults) before they all go to dinner and leave Jasmine with Jenny and Mariah (Jaya), and then there was sushi, wine and tears, oh my! ;-) TTFN
ScottishTexanalmost 2 years agoFinally!
Now we're finally getting some substance and meaning back into the story. I'm absolutely serious when I tell you you can delete Chapter's 7-9 and it would have virtually no impact on your story at all. This is the first decent chapter in ages.
You yourself lamented the drop in readership. I wasn't the only one bored to tears. Work harder and produce more chapters like this one and maybe some readers will come back. 4/5
Chris6160almost 2 years agoAuthor@TheSecretBunny
I grant it's been going on for a while; it was a personal choice. It always bothered me that in many incest stories the progression seems to be that two people who've grown up in modern society with all of the taboos and biological hang-ups around actual incest get over that hurdle in the space of about an hour and just start fucking. I was trying to guess at what the reaction might be if you have someone pining after another person without knowing if they return the feelings, on top of the fact that the relationship they want is full-on incestuous. I can promise you it doesn't continue in the same way for very much longer, but it will still be a central theme around most of the story going forward.
TheSecretBunnyalmost 2 years agoShe really needs to get over them, this has gone on for quite sometime . Her sister doesn't know it's her, but still the massive hang ups.
