All Comments on 'Something Afoot Pt. 01'

Interesting premise.

But rushed.

No real physical teasing. Just a rush to masturbation and cumming.

Needed much more in the way of verbal interplay.

Can you see how wet my pussy is? What are you thinking about while you're looking at it?

Dou you see how hard my nipples are? Do you want to toych them? Play with them? Raste them?

What would you like me to to do to you?

Look at my asshole. I need you to lick it for me. Would you like to do that?

Etc.

Four stars.

Short and crispy.

Feet fetish and teasing.

Well mixed and garnished with some quick sex, made it interesting to read.

Good first attempt.

Hence 5***** ❤️