All Comments on 'Speed Trap Town - Raw Ending'

The random beastiality at the end ruined it.

I’m just glad that she lived.

The part that should have been the meat of the story was just glossed over. It's understandable if you don't have the stomach to write non-con... just don't. Decent lead in, but you tried to stuff too many ideas in and they all wound up lesser for it.