by AimEnigmaClick
You should have at least one likeable character I wouldn't piss on either of those if they were on fire.
Nice build up to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter. As a side note somewhere in the future I would have both girls molested by two other girls from a poor blackout soriety.
Dollt2 (d16)
Thanks again
Likeable characters are overrated. I'd gladly share bodily fluids with either one of them. I give the edge to Chloe. I'd wager Abby will too at some point! Anyone looking for a fun read should stick around!
I am not sure what I expected but this wasn't it. There was a lot of dialog with character we don't have names for and then with all the commotion in the bedroom no one took notice and came in? Then of course the one with the most money wins control. I guess I was thinking both girls would be put down by the two sororities and not each other, but you can still make this a good story so waiting on the next chapter. I have read a lot of your work on here and I know we are in for something good.
Pappasleaze!
Will Chloe remain as top bitch in the next chapter or will Abbie find a way to get the upper hand?
As no one seemed to witness the cat fight I’m not sure how Chloe will use the victory to her advantage, as it’s one word against another.
Anyway, it was a great start to what is no doubt going to be an enjoyable series with lots of clashes and challenges between the two women
Beautiful story. I really like it when both girls can't fight but one of them is bigger and a bit stronger than her thin and very weak rival. Humiliation is another very exciting aspect. I look forward to more stories like this.