All Comments on 'Standing Room'

This was well written. I wonder, however, if the writer might attempt this from a first person telling.

Thank you for this feedback. I will try your suggestion!

Nice very good. Simply awesome

I really enjoued this story, thank you for sharing it with us. It could be nice to have a little more context around them, like how did they get there. A tiny little bit, I am talking about, not alot. Just an idea for your next work maybe,

An enticing little tale. Or was that, tail?

Thank you all for your feedback. If there’s a way to “like” or acknowledge each comment without posting it in the way I am now, I’d appreciate learning how!