All Comments on 'Stay for Submission Pt. 05 - Final'

I got the impression that this story went off track somewhere. At one point she’s asking to be dominated but he treated her like a disposable toy earning himself a deserved Darwin Award as opposed to an award for Wannabe Dom. Tbh it’s a depressing story, if he was bi/gay he should have just been up front about it, there’s nothing wrong with any of the options.

Still at least your actually putting your stories out there whips way better than I’m doing, so kudos for that.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)