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Click hereGabe looked at her and shook his head, "No you didn't."
Sabrina, "Yes I did and it was amazing. You just didn't enjoy me because I wasn't her," as she pointed towards me.
I was ready to defend myself but Gabe spoke, "Listen Sabrina you had your fun but that has ended. And you obviously can't handle me or you'd be singing a different tune."
Sabrina huffed, "I say that I can."
I quickly spoke, "Now Sabrina remember this is what we agreed to. You got to have your fun and Gabe says it's over."
Sabrina blindly spoke, "What makes her so different?"
Gabe smiled, "Trust me you don't want to go there."
Sabrina held her chin up to him, "Yes I do."
I thought oh boy!. I spoke, "Gabe that's enough."
Gabe looked at me and nodded.
He looked at her, "Sorry Sabrina I didn't mean to sound so crass with you but just...." and sighed, "when you're only using half of me and making me where a jimmy to where I can't appreciate your natural essence it's just frustrating."
Sabrina blinked, "Essence?"
Gabe nodded, "Yeah essence. How a girl feels both inside and out. Feeling their orgasm through my dick. Feeling everything my dick does inside them. No offense that's an ultimate high for me."
Sabrina blinked looking at Gabe through a new light, "You mean to tell me you actually listen to a girl's reactions during sex?"
Gabe shrugged like it was common place for a guy to do this, "Yeah Why not?"
Sabrina tilted her head at him and spoke slowly, "Because guys don't do that."
Gabe looked at her and spoke, "Well I'm not most guy's."
I laughed, "Ain't that the truth."
Morgan muttered, "I'll say."
Gabe pouted at us, "What?"
I laughed, "Nothing babe you're just saying something I've known all along."
He smiled at me that made me instantly want to melt. He walked up to me and kissed me on the lips causing my wanting the melting feeling to continue to be part of him.
Sabrina spoke causing our kiss to stop instantly pissing me off.
I wiped my anger away and looked at Sabrina, "Huh?"
Sabrina blushed but repeated herself so I could hear it clearly, "I said 'I want to feel that.'"
Gabe laughed for a minute before stopping and looking at her determination. He deftly spoke, "Oh you're serious."
Sabrina furiously nodded.
Gabe looked at me and spoke, "She wants to go for round 2!"
I looked up at his eyes and whispered my command to him, "Show her what you're capable of."
And in that instant Gabe gave me his devious smile that told volumes...... Sabrina had just written a check her pussy can't handle.
- COMMENTS
Darque_Lyte29 days agoAnother one where part of the story brings down the rest. The kids don't even know how much money they are making because the father gets all of it and just gives them an allowance? It feels like he is about to pull a disappearing trick with all the money and have something to blackmail the rest of the family so they don't come after him. The number of cameras alone is enough to have bothered me but the father being sole person in charge of the money just screams of bad things coming which detracts from the rest of the story.
pjpbabout 1 month ago4.5/5 overall (rounded up... mostly as current rating too low IMHO)
NIce narrative and decent MC (Gabe) character development so far. Nice writing style, light humor, consistent pretty decent well rounded MC. So far it seems the story indicated deepening threesome relationship story with Gabe, Kelly, Summer, and open to other females for occasional romp. I enjoy this story main theme, it's a plus.
Several story aspects and cheracters less overwhelming, future chapters will decide. Specific concerns:
1. Title misfitting chapters so far... and with current character development I hope it will remain misleading. I could be argued it (weakly) matches chapter one, completely off since
2. Mother - I reserve my judgment for future chapters. It could work OK if stepfather disclosed to be someone who in recent months effectively abandoned his wife and was stealing money from their household (as recent chapters seem to indicate)
3. I am not enjoying all three characters in the threesome - Summer seems to be a manipulative bitch, addicted to Gabe, but otherwise a ticking bomb once some of her ideas does not work out. Both Gabe and (to less extend) Kelly have some human backstory and feelings, Summer's story seems to be only money shortage, brain shattering sex with Gabe being cornerstone of their relationships (as opposite to some actual love apparent between Kelly and Gabe), dominating other females. To be honest, I would stop enjoying story if Kelly vanished or her relationship with Gabe long term tanked but I wouldn't have a significant issues if Summer vanished
4. Rape as described in this story is a major turn-off to me - here it seems to be 'she wanted it bad but her inhibitions kept her grounded, let's sneak her some drugs to help her spread her wings'... Sorry, erotic fantasy or not, non-consent drugging and sex is rape and no 'she actually enjoyed it and wanted more once drugs left her system' changes it
5. Potentially too slow pace - current progress could be slow without destroying the story mostly to allow to show the backstory. If pace maintaned, there is not way to actually develop the story and the only options left would be either 'new female joined in circumstances XYZ and had the most intensive orgasm ever' or soap opera variation (plenty of activities and permutations but little actual story progress)
My hope for future chapters:
1. Further story line development concentrating on current core, max with small (1 female?) addition. Deepen their relationship
2. No more rape (sex while non-consentually drugged)
3. Less 'trainings' of any sorts. Enough with Kelly early on and Morgan
