All Comments on 'Violet Riot Productions Ch. 01'

Imagery striking; entire scene — gazing/reflecting on passengers, the mono lids and the alley — easily visualized, almost frightening yet so intensely erotic. Loved the anonymity. Intrigued; want to see/feel where you take us.

She’s taking you someplace good, I hope! Really vivid writing — well done.

Wow! Such a roller coaster. The words are a swift current, leading to a maelstrom of feelings and lust.

Swiftly on to chapter 02.

Very well written. I had to speed read it just to see what was going to happen.

I came back to this story multiple times before I even made a lit account, it feels desperate and almost dreamlike. I didn't realize there were more installments to the story so I'm excited for the read!