All Comments on 'Streamers and a Stud Ch. 02'

Yah...idk im love the domination and all but the brain damage and only detailing the facefucking and not the sex kinda sucked. They couldve just dominated my the dick and change their personality so quickly by slaps lol.

Anyways it's ur story enjoy but I'm out

That was incredibly hot.

Great story again , only critique would be a bit longer , and Lilypichu would be a great inclusion

Above commenter's got a point; also, check your facts, because brain damage happens when the body dies, so this talk about hours isn't possible. Until passing out is possible, but even there we're talking about seconds. Staying passed out for more than a few seconds is called being in a coma.

A pretty wild ride so far for the first two chapters. I like the almost mind control like way these are going. I’m a huge fan of the throat fucking aspect of these so far. I’d love to see you include some details on their makeup running, tears streaming down their faces, and spit leaking from their mouths. Can’t wait to see more!

My only critique is that the story needs more sex it would been great to read how Josh fucked Pokimane and Valkyrae! Other than that, you have a great foundation.