by barefootcowgirl
Any time you feel up to sharing more, please do! Even if it is 100% fiction, 100 % fact, whatever. Susie is so much herself as defined by herself and not by anyone else. I love stories like that.
If there were any improvements/suggestions I could make, they would be completely subjective and selfish.(BUT not necessary to your stories, plot, and/or characters).
More desperation and/or peeing (personal kinks) and longer stories (only because I am a Greedy reader and love the main character).
Anyway, that is wishing on my part. And even if you don't write more / for a long time / include my kinks, I still rate the stories 5 stars!