All Comments on 'SubConscious Ch. 08'

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SirKevinSirKevinover 1 year ago

Well done! Thanks for sharing, and keep writing! I feel like some parts were almost skipped towards the end. Descriptions rather than details, that kind of thing. Looking forward to reading more from you, if you keep posting with the FFM tag

tadeuschtadeuschabout 1 year ago

Too bad! Such a set of stories and such a twist at the end. To have such a posh sex slave and give control to a strange girl! What a weakling Milord was, psychologically losing the advantage.

VallesMarinerisVallesMarinerisabout 1 year agoAuthor

@tadeusch, that's not how I saw it. For me, her lord was so strong he could let a secondary mistress take over while he enjoyed the benefits of both women with little effort of his own. That seemed doubly strong to me.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I was really enjoying this until you brought her friend into it.

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Chapter 10 (the conclusion) of "The Secret App" submitted. Thanks for the positive ratings of the previous chapters. More stories on the way. Your comments and critiques are important. Let me know what you think. I like the idea that Mars, the “male” planet, has the largest...

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