All Comments on 'Summer Fun Pt. 01'

Not bad. Writing is a little stilted, like it's a formal report of Goings On Of The Day With Special Addendum For Sexual Encounter rather than a filthy story about a dude getting a blowjob from his wife's friend and shooting cum on both their faces. Not really a problem though since it's still pretty hot in a weird way. Just a note concerning potential area for academic growth.

I liked it. I'd like to read more.

Great story really well written, looking forward to more from you :D

That's what friends are for!!!!!