by Goldeniangel
Well written story, but still think there will be problem for the couples
Swapping wives and asshole fucking? Weird, at best, in these fantasy stories. This does not rate a high score from me, if any score at all!
Why are you going to read a story called "Swapping Wives" if you don't like the idea of swapping wives???
Swapping implies some togetherness and shared balanced sex. This is just pimping out your wife for a night to another location for any sluttiness not normal at home - bad for long range marital expectations - just sick rough anal and pussy whipping - not normally your style is it?
Are you proud of this fuck and suck crap that anybody could write? You are normally better than this and you know it - don't you? Your audience expects more from someone who can!
In order to get a good score from you Don, the women would have both have to be impregnated with at least triplets by the other's husband.
This is a good series, #4 should be Paula & Kevin, then maybe in #5 al four of them together. Keep going, don't listem to those 'naysayers'.
was a very sexy story, i j/o several times whil;e reading it looking fowaed to a follow up on this one
Anonymous (catchy name) - What did you expect to find here? Your's was NOT constructive criticism! If you didn't like it, stop reading it!