by Goldeniangel
Anonymous (catchy name) - What did you expect to find here? Your's was NOT constructive criticism! If you didn't like it, stop reading it!
was a very sexy story, i j/o several times whil;e reading it looking fowaed to a follow up on this one
This is a good series, #4 should be Paula & Kevin, then maybe in #5 al four of them together. Keep going, don't listem to those 'naysayers'.
In order to get a good score from you Don, the women would have both have to be impregnated with at least triplets by the other's husband.
Swapping implies some togetherness and shared balanced sex. This is just pimping out your wife for a night to another location for any sluttiness not normal at home - bad for long range marital expectations - just sick rough anal and pussy whipping - not normally your style is it?
Are you proud of this fuck and suck crap that anybody could write? You are normally better than this and you know it - don't you? Your audience expects more from someone who can!
Why are you going to read a story called "Swapping Wives" if you don't like the idea of swapping wives???
Swapping wives and asshole fucking? Weird, at best, in these fantasy stories. This does not rate a high score from me, if any score at all!
Well written story, but still think there will be problem for the couples