All Comments on 'Swinging Palms Ch. 03'

by Dread_Pirate_Kedar

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lc69hunterlc69hunter3 months ago

Keep the story going

AccelarVesterAccelarVester3 months ago

The story has a nice, easy, progression. Keep it UP (Hah).

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I like the "Dread Pirate" bit. The story not so much.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another fetish-cuck short fantasy without the proper tags. No good.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

It certainly can't stop at Chapter 3! Both guys will die of Blue Balls. And the girls, well we don't want them to suffer

some similar fate.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good extension of the story. One question. Why is it that most of these stories have a lot of girl to girl action but almost none have guy to guy action. Why??

ausrabbausrabb3 months ago

dont care about the negative feedback story going ok

DunkirkDunkirk3 months ago

Forget the soft swap. Get them to fully swap and fuck their heads off.

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Married guy who’s got an English degree and a ton of experience and ideas. Will add more as I can get the words to paper.

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