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Click hereCindy knew they had crossed every line, and there was no going back. She felt a glow of peace and contentment that she had been missing for years. She looked over her shoulder at Mark to see him fast asleep on the sofa. He had the most devilish grin across his face. As she headed to the bathroom, she realized nothing would ever be the same now. They had numerous bridges to traverse. There would undoubtedly be a multitude of changes to be experienced on the path they now traveled. She looked again at Mark's grin and smiled, delighted with the turn of events. Damn, she was tired of dressing that boy. For now.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous15 days agoI agree that the story dragged on for nothing. Cindy kept holding back in a hippo-critical way. She is there, she’s not there, all for no sensible reasons. I think the author just wanted to drag things on and on for reasons that probably made sense only to him.
Desi Ghee15 days agoStory went on and on with very little payoff. I feel like I wasted my time trying to see if there would be a satisfying end. I just felt frustrated once done. A lot of unnecessary stops and starts. Most scenes were anticlimactic.
muskyboy15 days agoCindy's feigned reluctance went on way too long, especially in the absence of much dialogue.
xyster16 days agoI like your evolution as a writer. You have a style that I find very appealing. It is for those who love to read a real story, and not just a quickie. I hope you'll keep developing your style into something bigger and better. Your stories have a special flavor. While there maybe some that will criticize it, but there are those of us, who enjoy and appreciate your hard work. Keep going. Keep up the good work.
