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All Comments on 'The Abathandi Adventure Ch. 03'

by Scribe65

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SlofredSlofredover 3 years ago

You need to do an edit. the chapter repeats in the middle. same thing twice. ER3 THE RIVER. Other than that the story is great.

LurvtoLickLurvtoLickover 3 years ago

Pages 2/3 are a repeat of pages 1 and 2. Is the end missing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Repeated section. Re edit

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