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Kissing his chest, she realized they were staring at her. "So, what kinky and devious things do you have in mind for me?"
Charles looked at Sylvia and chuckled. They were already scheming about new discipline for Crystal now that she accepted her role as a sexual submissive. Both had some very kinky experiences lined up and were sure that after this weekend and today's sexual rump, she would not rebuke their dominance over her.
Turning to his wife, he chuckled and with a mischievous smile, he whispered, "You'll just have to wait to find out." Laughing he leaned forward, passionately kissing his wife. Then in an afterthought added, "Happy Anniversary."
Sylvia laughed and Crystal felt a thrill course through her. "I couldn't ask for anything better."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoFucking appalling. The story obviously ends with a HEA because it’s supposed to be a fantasy. I read the first 2 chapters early on and noticed that you’d picked up the story again.
This has to be the worst method in the history of forever in how to introduce someone to BDSM. How exactly is she supposed to trust either of them to be able to submit to them? You’ve tried to pass it all off as an altruistic move by the husband to improve their marriage. It’s utter bullshit she was lied to, kidnapped, raped and tortured whilst her spineless husband fucked around at the office and with Sylvia (unless they were supposedly the same person?), he took training as a dominant, fucking and using other subs in the process. Now he’s dropping it on her “surprise I’m your new Dom, I love you”.
It’s a breach of everything about BDSM. I’m all in favour of couples getting their kink on why didn’t he just sit down with her and talk about it? She’d never been unfaithful to him now he’s passed her round like a party favour.
The ONLY thing you actually got right about this is that their kink can be whatever they want it to be, it doesn’t have to be 24/7. If this was a real couple they would really need to sit down talk it through and set safe words and limits, if it was me at the top of the list would be Sylvia can fuck right off out of our lives.
Honestly you’ve got great writing skills but the plot needs work.
Tess (uk)
