All Comments on 'The Awakening of Penny Pt. 03'

by LissyW

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MigbirdMigbird12 months ago

Escalating in a wonderfully erotic way. You enjoy a wicked imagination; thanks for sharing it with us.

LissyWLissyW12 months agoAuthor

Migbird: Thanks, but my imagination can't take all the credit. The inspiration for this story is the real life adventure of a friend of mine, which is stiill ongoing. She's the real Penny. 🙂

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Your writing is excellent and each twist gets a little more intriguing. The flow is smooth and pulled me right along with these wonderful adventurous sexy women. Since this is is a real life adventure its hard to know if I should complement your character development but after reading the first three parts of this story and looking forward to more, I doubt I will be disappointed as I continue on to read your other works. Thank you so much for posting these and please continue on as it isn't often to find such great writing and a great story in the same place. W

LissyWLissyW12 months agoAuthor

Thanks (anonymous). Character development: Yes, it is slightly more limited in this series because I start from basic descriptions given to me by Penny, but there is a little scope for that. Only Savour Me and Anja's Game have characters invented and developed from scratch - so far.

Wiz1002Wiz100212 months ago

Well done LissyW, another great chapter and a great development of the characters and their increasingly kinky (& deviant?) experiences!

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulster12 months ago

Phenomenal! Raw, sexual, and amazing. Thrilled to read this and overjoyed with the ending. Her true sexuality overtaking her mind and body. I can not wait for more Lissy 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LissyWLissyW12 months agoAuthor

Aoife (lovely unusual name by the way): Thanks for all your lovely comments. I'm glad you are enjoying Penny's story. It's based in reality, so the pace is variable. Part 4 is started but might be a while yet. Meanwhile, I'm working on Anja's (purely fictitious) tale.

Lissy

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toesucker1toesucker112 months ago

oooo oooo. This is even hotter knowing it has a real life inspiration! Wonderful.

PappasleazePappasleaze12 months ago

I am not sure who to thank you the writer or the real life penny. whom ever itis worth more than the five stars I am allowed to give. Can't wait till the next exploit is told.

LissyWLissyW12 months agoAuthor

Pappasleaze: Thanks so much, that's praise indeed. It is Penny's story; she tells me the basic events, the bare bones if you like, and I write them up, adding a dash of my own imagination and some embellishments. I do find her journey very stimulating and I'm sure it has helped my imagination for my other stories.

She is loving having her story told like this!

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Absolutely wonderful, love your descriptive story telling. My cock is dripping already. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

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I'm a 30-something, tall, lesbian brunette. I love the female body and all things feminine. I enjoy the sheer power of female sexuality, and the allure of beautiful women and, of course, I adore writing and reading lesbian erotica.. My stories Over Heels, Savour Me, Anja's Ga...