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Hardrider56Hardrider5610 months ago

Good start but if June is tge Inn Kepper's daughter who is Claire?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I'm still trying to figure out who is Clare and who is June. Who is Bob and what if anything is he doing in this story. Does everyone change names in every paragraph? It now seems that Bob is Clare's daddy instead of Edward and Clare is now June.

GeasRuaGeasRua10 months agoAuthor

It was a typo, haha, I am waiting for the edited version to be approved.

GeasRuaGeasRua10 months agoAuthor

The typos are now fixed. Sorry, it took so long!

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